a day….
Just back from Justin’s wedding dinner @ meritus mandarin hotel Singapore. Felt so happy for him….entering another phase of his life…suddenly has an urge wanting to get married too. Oops! Just a sudden thought la…haha!
A busy day:Christ church as Co-lead. (Hey felly, you lead well today! Cheers!)
Afternoon Baptism class for new baby believers! Congratulation!
“I led worship for the evening service. Somehow, it wasn’t exactly according to what we have practiced yesterday, but i guess I just need to be more focused and rely on the Holy Spirit to lead us.” 
Night, wedding dinner as per mentioned above.
Reaching 12 now… tomorrow will be my second mum’s birthday, got her a watch and a cake which both was bought by my sister as I have no time to get it. Thanks dear mei. Love you much!
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December 3, 2007 at 7:10 am
Hello there!!
some words to note:
“going into another phase of his life” is correct.. but it would sound better as “entering another phase of his life”.
“Just a sudden thoughts”.. should be “just a sudden thought” because of the “a”.
“Baptism class for new babies’ believer” should be “baptism class for new baby believers”
the paragraph after that would sound better like this “I led worship for the evening service. Somehow, it wasn’t exactly according to what we have practiced yesterday, but i guess I just need to be more focused and rely on the Holy Spirit to lead us.”
The last paragraph is kind of long also. Next time try to break up the sentence into shorter ones. Don’t need to squeeze all the info into one sentence. This way, the structure would sound better. =)
———End of English lesson 101——–
haha.. not bad ah di.. your english really improving! i think in a few months time.. you’ll be able to look back and see a significant difference! =)
hmmm.. i think getting married is one of the things that’s always subconsciously on your mind ya? sometimes u just have to take a risk again.. step by step.
can’t wait for christmas! whee!!